Здравствуйте!
В общем надо написать письмо мотивацию в институт, в России это не принято, поэтому я не уверена что правильно поняла, что нужно. Почитала кое-что в инете о том как они пишутся, вот что вышло. Хотелось бы услышать ваши рекоммендации по доведению этого до ума
Спасибо
Dear Madam or Sir,
my name is Evgeniya, I’m from Russia. I would like to apply for Bachelor in Business with focus on Logistics in your Institute, starting in February 2008. Also, I’m going to get Diploma in Logistics. I know it is new course in MIT and I’m really interested in it.
As concerning my last education I can say that I’ve studied economics for 4 year in Moscow Institute of Power Engineering. There was short Logistics course during this period and I understood that it is I really want to do in my life. I am very hard-working, purposeful person. My professors were very interested in my researches in economics and I published 1 article in my institute’s annual journal about specific trade relations between Russia and developing counties of world. Also I finished short course in computing in Moscow Institute of Electronics and Mathematics. It was focused on programming. So, I have proven skills in this field.
My dream is to work in some international company and operate of various trade streams. There is no opportunity to get degree in Logistics in Russia that is why I want to study in MIT. Also I’m interested in MIT because It has focus on practice side of education and students can realize their knowledge in practice. I appreciate it very much because there’s lack of practice in Russian type of education.
If you need some more in formation do not hesitate and contact me please.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Evgeniya Khudyakova
(и тут будут мои координаты)
В общем надо написать письмо мотивацию в институт, в России это не принято, поэтому я не уверена что правильно поняла, что нужно. Почитала кое-что в инете о том как они пишутся, вот что вышло. Хотелось бы услышать ваши рекоммендации по доведению этого до ума


Dear Madam or Sir,
my name is Evgeniya, I’m from Russia. I would like to apply for Bachelor in Business with focus on Logistics in your Institute, starting in February 2008. Also, I’m going to get Diploma in Logistics. I know it is new course in MIT and I’m really interested in it.
As concerning my last education I can say that I’ve studied economics for 4 year in Moscow Institute of Power Engineering. There was short Logistics course during this period and I understood that it is I really want to do in my life. I am very hard-working, purposeful person. My professors were very interested in my researches in economics and I published 1 article in my institute’s annual journal about specific trade relations between Russia and developing counties of world. Also I finished short course in computing in Moscow Institute of Electronics and Mathematics. It was focused on programming. So, I have proven skills in this field.
My dream is to work in some international company and operate of various trade streams. There is no opportunity to get degree in Logistics in Russia that is why I want to study in MIT. Also I’m interested in MIT because It has focus on practice side of education and students can realize their knowledge in practice. I appreciate it very much because there’s lack of practice in Russian type of education.
If you need some more in formation do not hesitate and contact me please.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Evgeniya Khudyakova
(и тут будут мои координаты)